Monday, 3 July 2017

Cassidy @ GMS: Awesome Writing

Cassidy @ GMS: Awesome Writing

Check out this Awesome writing from Cassidy! He played the Game of Awesome and used the card he got to make a story. Cassidy also created is own character pictures.

Have a listen to his story!


  1. Kia ora Chloe here from Gilberthorpe School I'm a year 6 and wow am I blowen away.
    I love how at the end it turned into being your brother who hated you.I also like how there is a big of evilness and a big of trimaticness.Its amazing work keep it up.

    This reminds me of when our class writes discriptive writing...

    Maybe next time make sure it makes complet sence.
    Blog you later see yas

  2. Hi my name is Elham from Gilberthorpe school and I am year 6.
    "WOW" I think his writing is really goood from you you are saying.
    Next time it will look cool if you put a picture in there.

  3. Hi Cassidy from Grey Main School, Tobey here from Gilberthorpe School.
    This is a great bit of writing and I like the twist ending.
    Next time you could make it with more people.

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  5. Hi, my name is Leila from Owairaka District School. Cassidy you did a really good story. It's one of those stories that really hooks people in.
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  6. Kia ora Zoey here from Gilberthorpe School.
    I love Cassidy's writing it is just so good and she should keep up the good work. And maybe next time she should add more people in it.
    Blog U Later!!


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